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Okay, now my thesis is done, I've thought about it and decided now is a good time as any to work on my verbal skills. The idea is this:
* Give me a topic, and a style (of a person, or the name of a style). I will attempt to write a verse or two accordingly.
* If you could, give me links to the topic and examples of the style.
* No redistribution, please. The verses I write here are mine.
For example, in a previous thread, Klaushouse asked me to do a rap in the style of Kanye West on the topic of Pokemon, so I wrote one that could be rapped to Homecoming.
Have at it!
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Gangsta back off, you think you tha heavy weight?
I'm lookin, and seeing one big fat freight
You can't touch this mutha Fka, betta abate.
Turn around boy and we'll wipe the slate.
I'm on speed twenny four seven
the fast lane boy, till eleven
yo ride can't compare to my big engine
sh*t dude your rap, makes you a felon.
Your rhymes just blow, and we'll stop at that
Heck I'll even say it, your mother is fat.
Dis the pros boy face my gat.
Don't lose your balls, I got my bat.
I'll show you a nazi, you better run and hide,
Fo I grab the mic and commit lyrical genocide
You got something to say, don't get denied
I'd mop the floor with you like a rip tide.
I'm the god of rap you better believe it.
If you ain't like me, just heave sh*t
I get paid every time I weave Lit (literature)
See you buddy, just grieve & quit.
You and somer got the time to?
Maybe you should just continue
To lose in the face of a prodigy
To touch me you gotta have strategy.
You say my raps are a felony
well my buddy your gonna see
That your raps are just comedy
The just laugh and pee.
D to the X.
Hey look everyone KR is back,
And all ya fools are under attack.
I'm back from the time when my name I did post,
Under each post I made lots and most.
Yeah, that didn't make a lot of sense,
But that's because I wrote it as nonsense.
Its so your minds will self-destruct,
When you hear me you will be thunderstruck.
I hope all of you just die in holes,
because I am here to maim your souls.
When I'm done you won't even be able to type,
And the girls will scream to follow my hype.
So just leave me be you mother huggers,
You girlies just run around in your boots called Ughers.
So goodbye right now and don't go cryin,
I'll be back coz my name is KINGRYAN!!!
Give up the rap, and go listen to U2!
Don't diss the king of Ireland!
Wow this blow up since it was gone nice like to see this place with action.........
I'll PASS-A-FIST(pacifist)//
SMASH HIS HITS//
BASH HIS HIP//
Look at his chest look like pamala anderson , I think HE JACKED HER TITS!//
He a MASACUS , Just IMAGINE IT//
I'll SLAP HIS LIPS , JAB HIS bi**h , have him only RAP IN LISP!//
He can't MANAGE SICK , [choose another word] could only HANDLE DICK , he STRANGLES IT!//
DDX
Ya' rap ain't even complex!
Forget the momma' joke,
Cuz, I'm a make ya' choke!
Ya' like a myth, I'm a debunk ya!
Please your maikin' me tired,
Im' ya boss yellin' ya fired!
Forget the D to the X
It's all about the B-L-A-Z and the E,
Now give it a rest!
Ya' ain't even got no gat,
Not even a bat!
I'm a smoke ya' with a tech nine,
That's all fine,
Now that;s how ya' rhyme!
Ya' get the pun?
Now run!
It's REDRUM (Murder back words)
It's all about the BLAZE on,
Now gaze on!
One on one I'm a face ya'
Erase ya'
Endin my case,
Did I hurt cha' face?
I'm at the top of the tower,
Ultimate power!
Consider this the Hour!
How's that for power!
This ain't cinderella, I'll take ya' to the ball,
But I'll push ya' off and make ya fall!
Catch my drift?
Let this be a gift!
Step off the stage!
Before ya' put me in a rage!
B-L-A-Z and the mothaF*ckin E!!!
(Damn MS word!)
Recycling lines much?
At least my shit is new.
Random rhyming about such and such, vs. new lines, but only a few
hell yes, I'd take the latter for-the-win.
better pick it up, don't bore-the-kid!
I'll fuck you up,
like a computer vs. DOWNADUP
spendin' your spare time banging sluts
all hopped up on drugs
instead of turning a new phrase every now and then
I guarantee you blackfang, I'll be your END!
keep this up like babies,
and salvationn will be far,
your life will full of maybe's,
you will never live enough to buy a car,
so take my advice and follow me,
if you see some nice chick,
tell her good things about of course me,
and also tell her about my long dic*
bravo bravo
A did you guys know that one of my rhymes that I put on here can be looked up on google , its crazy , I typed Masacus in google and I saw a rap that I posted on here a couple of pages back , I was in total shock.
Not going to put this in a rap, but you guys are slowly loosing my respect... It seems that all you do is flaming each other and bragging about yourself, instead of making something smart up, something astonishing!
If this had been anything but rap, you would probably all have been banned for cursing and flaming...
It is just... I cannot find word for it...
Well this is called rap battle not rapping for fun , but if you want this to be astonishment then make a new topic that called rapping for fun.
It might be a rap battle, but all I see is people making a fool of themselves, because they are unable to think up good raps, and therefore have to use curses and flaming to make them look good.
What makes you seem more smart:
You are a shit!!
or
You seem familiar. Weren't you looking up from my toilet the other day, before I flushed?
Well you obviously don't understand rap , cuz the way words are put together with multis , wordplay , puchlines , that's what makes it smart you don't get it cuz there are a lot of words I bet you don't get your still young lil kid still.
Wow, you both need to calm down. Like Cenere said, Rap is not about cursing or how much of a big shot you are, but it's about a smart comeback or taunt.
I know me and DDX were swearing etc, but me and him are just playing around.
Just like Blackfang said, to much of 'smart' in your rap turns it into a 'kid rap' where the lyrics and rhymes cannot be taken as a threat. In witch we are trying to disrespect each other.
You seem familiar. Weren't you looking up from my toilet the other day, before I flushed?
That person is eaither a stawlker or Micheal Jackson!
Well you obviously don't understand rap , cuz the way words are put together with multis , wordplay , puchlines ,
That is what I am trying to express.... I hardly see any wordplays, I see a lot of stars instead.
And no, I have never seen myself as a rapper, because to me it is just poetry on some kind of music, said in a special way, and I suck at poetry.
But I still know that what some of you posted earlier on was of a better quality than now.
And judging from your about, well, then you are a "lil kid" as well. Nice going.
I know me and DDX were swearing etc, but me and him are just playing around.
I know that, I know that. It is just annoying me a little, because I usually associate excessive swearing with flamers.
Just like Blackfang said, to much of 'smart' in your rap turns it into a 'kid rap' where the lyrics and rhymes cannot be taken as a threat. In witch we are trying to disrespect each other.
Again, I know. But I would still find someone who is able to make a comeback without going "You're a fucking shit, your mom was totally fucked by me" (<stupid example) better than someone who says it like that.
For instanse I find Strop's way of rapping a lot more satisfying than what is going on atm. Firefly's was great as well.
And what I said was probably wrong formulated in the first place, it was getting really late at that time.
In short: Would be nice to see people think up a good response that makes the opponent look like a fool, instead of making yourself look stupid and slightly immature.
But that is just me.
Ah Cenere...
I seemed to have re-entered this thread at the wrong time...
I don't quite know what to say on this issue. So I will just stay quiet.
Thread is locked!