Hello again, community. I haven't seen a thread regarding animations here, sorry if it has been made before. I figured it would be nice to have a place to post animations, so here goes. Of course they need to be made by you, not stolen somewhere off of the interweb. Hmm, if there's enough animators on here, we could make a contest...
I'll go first, posting the first real animation I've done. It's composed of 21 frames (looping in a way that doesn't really make sense, because I was too lazy), each frame drawn in Photoshop, then opened in the GIMP and exported as a .gif. I tried to get a sense of how velocity works...
Thanks for the half of that compliment that was directed at me.
But I wants help!!
If we all ignore those flickering black lines that are a result of a faulty optimization... And the fact that so far only his pants are shaded. It's my first attempt at animating walking, and I'm slightly clueless and sort of just fumbling along hoping for a decent result... Does this look okay? Should I drop the torso/arm movement? Is it going at the right pace, or too fast/slow? Is there anything else you could advise me to do (keeping in mind that it is not done)?
Hmmm... Before anyone tells me... His hands should follow his hip movements. And I think it does look wrong with his torso moving like that... Eep. Still want opinions/advise. Sorry about the double post.
The legs are fine (very good actually, walking is one of the tougher basic things to get right) but hands on hips generally makes for a strutting. In this case the way the body and head move it looks a bit like a pidgeon's walk haha.
If you wanted a stylized walk that's okay but it'd be pretty rare for somebody to be walking like that, keeping their hips perfectly still. If anything you ought to move the hands with the hips, which you've already stated above. I would actually just leave the hands swinging but since this guy is closer to marching than walking maybe I'd have him swinging his arms stiffly.
I am not very good at criticism, but the upper body is rather stiff. He is walking a little too fast, yes, and it does not look much like strolling to me. A bit more - weight to the character, shoulders, hips and torso should be moving more, head too. As I said, I cannot specify it further.