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tennisman24
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I saw that Thoads kind of died so I want to make a new one because I like reading them. So I will need 3 judges to judge all of the entries.

Rules: The story must be between 150-300 words. If it is more than that it is disqualified. Also if there is any flaming or spamming I will YELL!!!

So we need 3 judges to judge it.

1st round starts on May 8th (my brothers birthday) And the theme will be Exciting Adventures.

P.S. Dont let this thread die.

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Pixie214
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plz don't make fun of it,


well I'm sorry Mr. phsycomonkey but.... Nah it was very good kinda creepy and it had a nice atmosphere built up.
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lol ty pixie, arrow I don't think he has to, it was very good for something that short, good job sssssnake

Pixie214
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it was very good for something that short, good job sssssnake


I agre and I'm not sure on the rules for story lenght it was 150 words but I think alt changed it and now I don;t know

Sssssnnaakke it was good though and kinda eery somehow it kinda freaked me out lol.
TRUdog
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And you guys make fun of MY story? :/ Dudes if you can't do any better just don't talk. Cause it wasn't.

tennisman24
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It was good psychomonkey but don't triple post.

phsycomonkey
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sorry for the overpost, but one of them was several hours apart.

Pixie214
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Is there a deadline/ date for judging for this?

Pois0nArr0w
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arrow I don't think he has to


It's a good story, I just thought it was kinda short.
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Oh don't get me wrong it was a good story, but sometimes it's better short.

tennisman24
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Is there a deadline/ date for judging for this?


Yes it is May 18th.
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By power of deviantart, I summon thee!
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Skiing
His mental health had always been unstable; he was prone to night terrors and hearing voices. But his mental state was not too scrambled; he simply took a low does of medication. Two pills, 200 milligrams, that's all. Two pills each month and he was fine.
He and his two best friends had gone skiing. Up in a pristine slope in Colorado; the sun was shining off the snow, creating a pale-white glow that pervaded everything in their area. The time was 3:00.
He was a surreptitious man; his true emotions hidden behind a facade of stupidity and indifference, his eyes stared blankly at whatever they were fixated on. Yet behind those stupid eyes was a salient intelligence and word smithing; after all, the best writers are insane. He wrote editorials and short stories for a living, and his name was on many popular short stories across various collections: The Compendium of Tales, The Story Collections X, XIV, and XVI, and Stories of Steel. His publishing agency, Sycorax, was at first reluctant to enter his stories in these collections; they soon realized, however, by the sharp eye of one Mr. Crestview, that without his stories, the entire book would be tantamount to a random collection of scatterbrain thoughts vomited onto paper. He was good at what he did.
Their skiing trip had gone smoothly for a while. It was getting dark, however, so they needed to head back to the lodge; they had gone far out, so they needed to backtrack to the lift. He was walking at the rear of their group; minding his own business. But then, he heard a scream. The others weren't fazed, so he felt it was his duty to save the lost, freezing person who owned that scream.
Trekking out into the woods, he continued to hear screams, which enticed him into a northern direction. He kept trudging through the seemingly vampiric snow, still hearing these screams, as the wind pounded brutally against his face.
He began to feel weak, and deathly cold. He was catching hypothermia; yet still he continued onward to the person he was to rescue. Getting weak, he sat down up against a stalwart tree, breathing heavily. His vision began to darken. . . .
He awoke in a friendly lodge; with his friends next to him. He immediately got up, silently, and sat by the fire; the biting cold inside of him smoothing into a recuperating cool; he felt as though he were a half-corporeal being who lay in a cool river, the sublime cool inside of him like the freshest water. After warming sufficiently, he went over to his knapsack, and checked his pills. The bottle read on the sticker: "50 mg pill." He sank, contented, into a leather chair, and took two more pills. However, sometimes he swears he can still hear the terrorized screams of a small child in those woods. . . .

It's not incredible, but it suits the theme. Sort of. . . .

phsycomonkey
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dang thats good

Pixie214
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Yes it is May 18th


Cool I just thought I'd better check.
tennisman24
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Cool I just thought I'd better check.


No Problem. And we need more people to submit stories!!

Jalex wants to read a lot.
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Gonna be done with my story soon! Perhaps within the next five minutes...

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