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tennisman24
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I saw that Thoads kind of died so I want to make a new one because I like reading them. So I will need 3 judges to judge all of the entries.

Rules: The story must be between 150-300 words. If it is more than that it is disqualified. Also if there is any flaming or spamming I will YELL!!!

So we need 3 judges to judge it.

1st round starts on May 8th (my brothers birthday) And the theme will be Exciting Adventures.

P.S. Dont let this thread die.

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Pois0nArr0w
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An Answering Call


Death was the first thing I felt. Or, was it the pain? The sharp, searing agony that one might feel if he were to be run through with a stake. Yes, I believe it was the pain I first felt, but almost instantly, I was overwhelmed by a flood of darkness, nearly chilling me to my very core. This, I believe, was what killed me, not the fear, not the pain, no, but Death itself. It took me into the folds of its dark, haunting robes, and brought me here, to where I am now. I stand before a seemingly endless plain of tall, pale yellow grass. I look up to find no sun or moon, only a dark, menacing blanket of the deepest black. My gaze falls on everything around me, but it is like looking at a photograph, silent and unchanging. As I gaze, I think that surely this must be Hell. Suddenly, all thoughts in my head are pushed aside by something Man has known all of his life; primal fear.
All rationality is lost to me, perhaps even gone forever, as I run for my very life, if I still have one in this dark, abysmal plain. What I am running from exactly, not even I fully know. All I heard was a sharp, broken, high-pitched howl, and all I sensed was my own fear. This howl could have belonged to anyone, or anything, perhaps a demon, a Hellhound, or even the Devil Lucifer himself. As I ran, I stooped lower and lower, until I was leaping over the terrain like a wild animal, pushing off with my legs, landing on bent arms.
Then, the first changes started taking place. My ears grew elongated, tapering to a point. My jaw began to extend, stretching my skin until it was ripped from my skull. My hands and feet became bony, skeletal paws. I was doubled over in pain, my mind blank as to why this might be happening. When the changes were complete, I no longer resembled myself. I was, I am, a horrid creature, no more a man than a rock might be alive. I resemble now a skeletal hound, all bone and ligament, my flesh torn from my bony frame. I still hear those menacing howls, yet, they do not frighten me anymore. The calls seem welcoming, almost friendly. Sometimes, even I start to howl, and always, there is an answering call.


-Pois0nArr0w

Jrmagic
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I heard an almost inaudible whisper in the strong wind, I tried listening but my mind was elsewhere. I was seeing hallucinations of apparitions sucking out innocent peoples' lives. All of a sudden, a shiny skull appeared out of thick air, and I stared at it's ghostly appearance... I started to drift... drift... I felt the legs in my bones snap, and I looked down at the gushing blood... You'll die today, Devon. You'll die today...

I woke up screaming, and drenched in sweat. I felt around for my trusty blanket, grabbed it frightfully, and cuddled the soft fabric. I looked outside my window, staring at the glowing stars in the night. I shook my head, and glanced at the LCD alarm clock on the drawer next to my bed. It read, 11:59 P.M.. I suddenly felt very weak and somewhat, automatic. My legs starting moving by themselves, and before I could utter a gasp, I was outside in front of an army of skeletons.

"We warned you," choked one of the soldiers. "Now you will die."

"NO!" I shrieked. "DON'T KILL ME, NOOOOO! GET AWAY FROM M-"

~~~~~~~~~~~The End~~~~~~~~~~~~~~




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^_< I hope you like it!

phsycomonkey
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wow thats good(referring to all)

tennisman24
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Alright remember Monday is the deadline. Get more stories.

jalex13
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whoa this is gonna be hard. You guys are great writerS!

tennisman24
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You are right jalex. I don't even know how mine is going to compete with all these.

Pixie214
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Yeah I'm glad I ain't judging it (sorry jalex) the stories are kinda cool.

mentorso123
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A dirty paper bag blew by my cold, scantily clad feet. I was alone. As I started walking in the direction that I though I should walk in (as I was hopelessly lost) I heard footsteps. My breathing quickened as it was at the time of night that no one should rightfully be out (or even awake for that matter). The footsteps quickened, as did mine. I was afraid to turn around, fearing what might be there.

to be continued later

tennisman24
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Since nobody really is posting stories, I am going to end it now. I will get jalex to judge.

phsycomonkey
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ok... HEY ARGEN!!! lol ur not on much, anyways my storys back if you see this,(most likely not)p.s My xbox will be fixed later in summer tell u when
gl everyone on judging

tennisman24
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Since jalex isn't on right now, I am going to get Alt to judge again.

thisisnotanalt
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Shepherd

Okay then. . . . .

phsycomonkey
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, wait alt is judging?

tennisman24
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Okay then. . . . .


Nevermind. I got Nicho to judge if he is going to come back.
nichodemus
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I'll do it tomorrow. Got to sleep soon!

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