ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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moomentality
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Frog contemplates life
Lillies bear scents and colours
Frog thinks life is well.

OH I 'effed up my first poeam.

iamnotironman
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Frogs on lily pads.
Catching bugs and jumping all
Over the huge pond.

New and improved.

Deceptive
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Peacefulness

Radiant lilies,
Crystal still water, calmness
still lives in our world.


Wasn't really able to grasp the theme, so my haiku wasn't too great.

Efan
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Cool, smooth, soft felt pads
Cold, watery graves lie under
calm tranquility.

Sorry if punctuation isn't allowed, but it's to help convey the way I'd like it spoken aloud.

Koru7
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Unnamed (Give it your own naming)

slow rain, dripping off,
green leaves bend slowly down,
rain showers coldly.

deathopper
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The ebbing lilies,
Corrupting my reflection,
Drift through my sad life.

Yes, ebbing is a word.

deathopper
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Sorry for the double post, but Efan you're second line is 8 syllables instead of 7.

Cold, wa-te-ry graves lie un-der

Efan
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Sorry for the double post, but Efan you're second line is 8 syllables instead of 7.

Cold, wa-te-ry graves lie un-der

Thanks for pointing that out.

Here's the correction:
Cool, smooth, soft felt pads
Cold, watery graves under
calm tranquility.
Kyouzou
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Pacific ripples
beryl veneer, azure canvas
Raucous symphony of croaks


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Note that 'acific' is used in the context of peaceful and not the ocean between Asia and the Western United States.

Zaork
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Obfuscated, I
Hide, lost in lilting shadows
softly decomposed.

invisibleninjagirl
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Hidden world
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Quiet, secret world
Sheltered away from hustle
Lilies float in peace.

ug5151
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Shallow Waters
Holding small worlds
Lilly Pads afloat.

aknerd
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A Hiding Place

A dead face is covered.
The passing lilies conceal
My hidden bodies.

FallenSky
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I've been asked to do the judging. I'm still feeling awful after two weeks so I'll only post the five Haikus that deserved to win the most, in no particular order.

If you want a full bodied judging, you're free to go ask somone else, that's about all I can invest for now. Thanks for your comprehension.

aknerd
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A dead face is covered.
The passing lilies conceal
My hidden bodies.


Woops! Forgot to change the first line.

I meant to say:

A covered dead face;
The passing lilies conceal
My hidden bodies.

I would also like to note that I dislike the semi-colon in the first line, but apparently not having punctuation in every line is a felony or something.
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