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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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Peter20
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@dair tamed is two sylabol not one

but yea you last line is six

acmed
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@dair tamed is two sylabol not one


No it's not
dair5
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Thanks acmed. I think the problem is in how the words are pronunced. Which is fine, because people from different places usally speak in different accents or tones. But is it agreed that the website is right? I usally use it when I doubt my syallables for haikus.

Oblitr8
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Nomad

Life

All life is special
Some have a more crucial job
None are turned away

PlasmaMan
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Nomad

Wind
It whispers the past
Snaps us to the present day
Future lies within

Oblitr8
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Nomad

Nature

The cradle of life
Gives all components a chance
Some have better luck

jacksonghuntington
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I havn't done this in ages! Still seems fun though.

Circle
The elder, the chief,
The hunter of the village,
A new baby boy.

Lion King FTW!

jackpot00
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first try at this contest haha


[b][i]The Eagle

Bold and majestic,
Soaring over the earth so high,
None can touch the eagle.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Soaring over the earth so high None can touch the eagle

Soar(1)ing(2) o(3)ver(4) the(5) earth(6) so(7) high(8).
Needs to be 7 syllables.
None(1) can(2) touch(3) the(4) eag(5)le(6)
Needs to be 5 syllables.
KingLemon
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Meh, I've been gone a while...I'll be coming back slowly!
Here's my entry, not my best...It tried. I'm exhausted, just got back from 2 1/2 hour work out >_<.
lajwoiajlck

Entry:
A subtle beauty
Slowly being used, abused.
Now gone and ugly.

couldn't think of a way to get my point across...ah well!

MusicMan102
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Not that great, but here ye go.


The Earth's true beauty,
Flourishes under the sun.
Breathing life through all.

acmed
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Nomad

Entry's closes tomorrow. You may not post a Haiku afterwards. Judging should be done 3-10 days after the deadline. May vary due to Mav's schedule.

Darktroop07
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Shepherd

Coldness
The icy wind chills
Bringing in the cold nights
AS the ice Grows

My first Haiku Post here I know its not the est but I guess I'll post more in the future hopefully getting better~Sparkman

EmperorPalpatine
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Bringing in the cold nights

Bring(1)ing(2) in(3) the(4) cold(5) nights(6)
Should be 7 syllables.
AS the ice Grows

AS(1) the(2) ice(3) Grows(4)
Should be 5 syllables.
Darktroop07
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The Chill of Freezing,
Bringing in Winters Downfall,
Tenderness arrives.

Took me 30 Mins checking this one for mistakes I hope it doesn't go to waste!~Sparkman.

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