ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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IcyIndia
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Thanks! Now I've got to think of one for this week's contest.

jaza_m
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Congratulations IcyIndia!

Ill think of something good for this theme. I sought of can't even wrap my head around what it is I've been thinking about it so much... > <

Cenere
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Title-change, and a note to whoever wins next: Please redirect merit request at nearest other mod. Thanks and away!

jdoggparty
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Gosh darn freak. Your themes are...

ExplosiveDynamite
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Oh.. I didn't even look at the new theme.. I don't think I'll get an entry in for this one..

Freakenstein
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A sudden, forced sleep
Drink the Kool-aid and awake!
Voices in my head

One with many minds
trepan the wicked demons
elevate your mind

^ hintity-hint-hint

Basically, just find (or insight) a psychological state. Something that happens, occurs, or is undergone in the mind. Or you can find an event that happened because of something psychological. You can get reeeeally creative with this one if...

...You set your mind to it! *badum PSSSH*

Endscape
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my mind warps and rifts, searing pain echoes within,... am i phsycotic. im on my psp again XP

MusicGamer
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This is late, but this would have been my entry for the Elements theme:

Perspicacity

In the nebulous,
perspicuous enigmas
elucidate all.

The second verse, &quoterspicuous enigmas," is a play on words, as something that is enigmatic is quintessentially ambiguous. Elements, notwithstanding elucidating things through their objective qualities, are verily mysterious due to those very atypical traits.

Alternate version:

Amidst (or amongst) distortion (or perversion)
of truth, unique paradigms
elucidate all.

Murder

Harrowing the mind,
aphotic cerebrations
coerce one to kill.

The first and second verse could be interchanged, as the relative clause in the first verse could either precede or follow the modified subject in the second verse (though following it would make it the first verse). However, I find putting the relative clause before it to be more stylistically apropos for a haiku.

Pazx
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Screaming voices burn
I regret it to the day
alone, in my cell

CrossViper
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My Boredom

So slow in the start,
it seemed so never-ending,
until this haiku.

Endscape
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im sorry to be the one but, music gamer is an absolute pedant lol, srry.

Endscape
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my mind warps and rifts
searing pain echoes within
am i... phsycotic

this how i wanted to post it but i was on my psp earlier.

HahiHa
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A simple, pure laugh
Killed, distorted by my mind
Mockery is born

GhostOfMatrix
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Could someone explain what this is and how it works ?

It's a haiku contest.
Read the first page.
If you don't know what a haiku is then click on this and read.

You submit your haiku that consist of syllable lines of 5,7,5. The haiku you submit has to follow the theme.
ExplosiveDynamite
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Just to say I entered.. I'll do something for the sake of it.

Lost in my own mind,
All these thoughts whirring through me.
Can't think.. descending.

*sigh* Oh well.

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