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Maverick4
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Peasant

A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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daleks
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Chamberlain

I was expecting an Olympic theme...you disappoint me acmed.

A message floating
It tells me a long story
Of a bottled trip

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Sent by sea to shore,
Resisting the salty spray,
My salvation sails.

dudeguy45
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Peasant


I guess I just don't like how you say things like kick in the nuts, or you like that, idiot. It isn't very nice and I feel its pushing some possible participants away. I know you're trying to be funny, but back off a little bit. You're a poetry judge, not a comedian.


See, it's like good cop bad cop, but replace "cop" with "haiku judge". I'm sure you can figure out who is which. Not to mention he totally COPIED MY JUDGIN FORMAT.
acmed
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See, it's like good cop bad cop, but replace "cop" with "haiku judge". I'm sure you can figure out who is which.


If I say I'm bad cop, that makes me honest and good. But if I say you're the bad cop, that makes a liar, and bad...

This is why we can't have nice things.

Not to mention he totally COPIED MY JUDGIN FORMAT.


MAAAAN IM HELPING YALL BRING THE CONTEST BACK TO MERIT REWARDS AND YOU BE TRIPPIN IN MY JUDGING? MAAAAN THATS SOME EFFED UP SHIZZZLE!
lC4l
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Nomad

Found a strange message
That was inside a bottle
It said, "Drink me, jerk."

Salvidian
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Farmer

Carried by kingship
The bestowal of bewitchment
Communication

Bestowal is 2 syllabus and means gift, FYI.
Source. NOT 3 syllabus.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Bestowal is 2 syllabus and means gift, FYI.
Source. NOT 3 syllabus.

HMS says 3, but it doesn't matter because acmed says it goes to whatever fits.
Salvidian
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Farmer

Fine. I'll change it.

Carried by kingship
The bounty of bewitchment
Communication

killersup10
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Blacksmith

drifting alone
oblivian glass bottle
holy info unfolds


If the first line is only 4 sylables then...


loathing bottles float
messages unraveled there
undone,drowning down

GhostOfMatrix
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Herald

Cast through shining seas,
letters to a past lover.
Rekindled amor.

kevin8ye
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Nomad

Fluttering letter
Roaming mystical bottle
Fallen in ocean

GhostOfMatrix
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Herald

Cast through shining seas,
letters to a past lover.
Rekindled amor.

Just so the judge isn't confused, amor is Spanish for love.
kevin8ye
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Nomad

who r the judges?

daleks
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Chamberlain

Just so the judge isn't confused, amor is Spanish for love.

I would hope that they would know that. It would be really sad if they didn't.
who r the judges?

I think it is dudeguy's turn. I honestly don't know though.
lozerfac3
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Farmer

??????? It's August 8th. ???????

Something's far away
It's a note in a bottle
NO! That stupid bird!

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