ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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acmed
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Oh my! Sorry Emp!

The So Good that it was Skipped Award: EmperorPalpatine.

Sent by sea to shore,
Resisting the salty spray,
My salvation sails.


I like how you used multiple S's in this. Made it sound fresh. The last line really left the poem with a bang, with the first and second helping you out a lot. Good job Emp! Keep it up!

dudeguy45
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Officially: i figured since I judged 2 times acmed would do the same.

Unofficialy: i was in upstate ny on vacation.


Sorry. I got this one.

acmed
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Officially: i figured since I judged 2 times acmed would do the same.


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Unofficialy: i was in upstate ny on vacation.


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Inform us next time.
kevin8ye
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do u actually get a merit, or is there just a chance.

kevin8ye
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So.... I'm the first haiku for this contest......

Anyway.....
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Boys version

Roaming far and wide
Searching for his lost keepsake
Lost wandering soul

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Or..............
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Girl Version

So.... I'm the first haiku for this contest......

Anyway.....



Roaming far and wide
Searching for her lost keepsake
Lost wandering soul

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acmed
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do u actually get a merit, or is there just a chance.


No merits for now.

And, choose one haiku. Just one.
Salvidian
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Seriously? I win and I can't even see it with my failing computer.

Happy nevertheless.

halogunner
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here goes

The guilds praise him
No champion could best him
A legend is he

kevin8ye
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ok, then:

Roaming far and wide
Searching for his lost keepsake
Lost wandering soul

javasully
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Here goes...

A hero is found
Stand strong, my brave warrior
We all need you now

killersup10
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standing tall and proud
monsters hides cover his body
conquering beast easily

Darktroop07
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The Bequeathed Hero
Forgotten by time.
His son is now in glory.
Honored by many.

KingLemon
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Oh my...Hi...Been a LONG time since I was here last!
I'm a little rusty, I have what i want in my head, just can't put it quite into haiku form like I used to.
The Bequeathed Hero
Clashing swords, cutting.
A long battle. The crowd stills.
A new champion.

kevin8ye
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btw, whos gonna judge this?

dudeguy45
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Ok entries closed ill get on this thing you call "judging"

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