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Maverick4

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Peasant

Posted August 24, '09 12:48am UTC

A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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Yodadude53

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Nomad

Posted January 20, '10 2:24am UTC

This doesn't go with the theme but I wrote a haiku about AG
Armor Games is the Best
Because it has awesome games
I love Armor Games
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It's not the best but I was bored :P

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EnterOrion

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Nomad

Posted January 20, '10 2:32am UTC

First line is 6 syllables.

Also, try not to post haiku's that aren't on topic. Even posts that aren't on topic here are frowned upon. But still, I'll let this one slide.

Judging is that much harder.

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Ernie15

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Bard

Posted January 20, '10 2:57am UTC

Who is judging this round?

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Kyouzou

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Jester

Posted January 20, '10 3:22am UTC

I think it's supposed to be dudeguy and orion as co-judges but I could be wrong....

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dudeguy45

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Peasant

Posted January 20, '10 11:05pm UTC

I am. Deadline will be... friday.

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Yodadude53

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Nomad

Posted January 21, '10 12:44am UTC

First line is 6 syllables.

Oh, woops. Anyways, I didn't want it to be judged.

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FloydTC

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Nomad

Posted January 21, '10 3:47am UTC

Carry... and swoops again

6...

air is clear today
no aircrafts polluting it
no asthma attacks

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Freakenstein

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Jester

Posted January 21, '10 4:37am UTC

6...

>_>

Freakenstein, take 2:

"Scraping the heavens,
Man's bird flies to its great niche,
Loads, then swoops again."

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Parsat

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Blacksmith

Posted January 21, '10 6:27am UTC

Man's hubris in flight
Slicing through the virgin air
An ancient cloud fades

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Crab65

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Nomad

Posted January 22, '10 4:54am UTC

Whoosh! Zoom! Flash! Whiz! Whoom!
Spiralling into yonder
Deity of the air

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DrElmer

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Shepherd

Posted January 23, '10 2:00am UTC

Jets soar through the air
Apparently in the sky
But who knows for sure?

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dudeguy45

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Peasant

Posted January 23, '10 2:21am UTC

And entries are closed. Judging is tomorrow.

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dudeguy45

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Peasant

Posted January 23, '10 8:01pm UTC

Gleaming in the sun
soaring high through cold blue skies
trails of smoke follow

I'm going to try a different placing system. 5 places, and an adjective or something for the others, Get it? Sorry about my partial inactivity.

You Wish

Kirby998!

I like Italy
RING RING RING RING RING RING RING
My Private Jet please?

If this is true... then... I HATE YOU!

Where's Your Inhaler?!?!

Floyd!

air is clear today
no aircrafts polluting it
no asthma attacks

I hope you meant "through".

chitown!

Flying thru the sky
above the city at night
perfectly landing

Sheeyea. Spell Check.

It flies with glee. So do we.

SilentQ

"Surrounded by sky,
Roflcopter flies with glee,
SOI SOI SOI SOI SOI."

My noob meter is shaking out of control. Just kidding. What does the last line mean, I don't know.

Twice the charm. Or not.

Ernie15

Jefferson Airplane
Went through a dramatic change
Jefferson Starship

I have no idea What Jefferson is. A plane? *slack jaw*

Is this Haiku here?!?!?

DrElmer

Jets soar through the air
Apparently in the sky
But who knows for sure?

Well where else could it be?

Wood (5th Place)

adios194

Flying higher now.
Killing innocent people!
I call it useless.

Some would disagree. First line is good.

Bronze (4th place)

EnterOrion!

Hot exhaust beams fast,
The jet begins to takeoff,
It booms off the deck.

Reminds me of an aircraft carrier. Booms nicely puts it together.

Cockpit (3rd place)

Freakenstein!

"Scraping the heavens,
Man's bird flies to its great niche,
Loads, then swoops again."

Scraping the heavens. Ow.

CoPiliot (2nd place)

Parsat!

Man's hubris in flight
Slicing through the virgin air
An ancient cloud fades

Fits your standards nicely, Parsat. Big words. 2nd place.

THE PILOT IN CHARGE!

Crab65

Whoosh! Zoom! Flash! Whiz! Whoom!
Spiralling into yonder
Deity of the air

Onomatopoeia. Nice. Simple, yet complex. Separate, yet together.

Go to a mod for your merit. Congrats.

As for the rest of you...

HAPPY HAIKUING!

Gleaming in the sun\r\nsoaring high through cold blue skies\r\ntrails of smoke follow  \r\n\r\nI'm going to try a different placing system. 5 places, and an adjective or something for the others, Get it? Sorry about my partial inactivity.\r\n\r\n[b]You Wish[/b]\r\n[b]\r\nKirby998![/b]\r\n[i]\r\nI like Italy\r\nRING RING RING RING RING RING RING\r\nMy Private Jet please?\r\n[/i]\r\nIf this is true... then... I HATE YOU!\r\n[b]\r\nWhere's Your Inhaler?!?!\r\n[/b]\r\n\r\nFloyd!\r\n\r\n[i]air is clear today\r\nno aircrafts polluting it\r\nno asthma attacks[/i]\r\n[b]\r\nI hope you meant "through".[/b]\r\n\r\n\r\nchitown!\r\n\r\n[i]Flying thru the sky\r\nabove the city at night\r\nperfectly landing\r\n[/i]\r\nSheeyea. Spell Check.\r\n\r\n[b]\r\nIt flies with glee. So do we.[/b]\r\n\r\nSilentQ\r\n\r\n[i]"Surrounded by sky,\r\nRoflcopter flies with glee,\r\nSOI SOI SOI SOI SOI."[/i]\r\n\r\n\r\nMy noob meter is shaking out of control. Just kidding. What does the last line mean, I don't know.\r\n\r\n[b]Twice the charm. Or not.\r\n[/b]\r\nErnie15\r\n\r\n[i]Jefferson Airplane\r\nWent through a dramatic change\r\nJefferson Starship[/i]\r\n\r\nI have no idea What Jefferson is. A plane? *slack jaw*\r\n[b]\r\nIs this Haiku here?!?!?[/b]\r\n\r\nDrElmer\r\n[i]\r\nJets soar through the air\r\nApparently in the sky\r\nBut who knows for sure?[/i]\r\n\r\nWell where else could it be?\r\n\r\n\r\n[b]Wood (5th Place)[/b]\r\n\r\nadios194\r\n\r\n[i]\r\nFlying higher now.\r\nKilling innocent people!\r\nI call it useless.\r\n[/i]\r\nSome would disagree. First line is good.\r\n\r\n\r\n[b]Bronze (4th place)[/b]\r\n\r\n\r\nEnterOrion!\r\n\r\n[i]\r\nHot exhaust beams fast,\r\nThe jet begins to takeoff,\r\nIt booms off the deck.[/i]\r\n\r\nReminds me of an aircraft carrier. Booms nicely puts it together.\r\n\r\n[b]\r\nCockpit (3rd place)[/b]\r\n\r\nFreakenstein!\r\n\r\n[i]"Scraping the heavens,\r\nMan's bird flies to its great niche,\r\nLoads, then swoops again."[/i]\r\n\r\nScraping the heavens. Ow.\r\n\r\n[b]\r\nCoPiliot (2nd place)[/b]\r\n\r\nParsat!\r\n[i]\r\nMan's hubris in flight\r\nSlicing through the virgin air\r\nAn ancient cloud fades[/i]\r\n\r\nFits your standards nicely, Parsat. Big words. 2nd place.\r\n\r\n[b]\r\nTHE PILOT IN CHARGE!\r\n[/b]\r\nCrab65\r\n\r\n[i]Whoosh! Zoom! Flash! Whiz! Whoom!\r\nSpiralling into yonder\r\nDeity of the air[/i]\r\n\r\nOnomatopoeia. Nice. Simple, yet complex. Separate, yet together. \r\n\r\nGo to a mod for your merit. Congrats.\r\n\r\n\r\nAs for the rest of you...\r\n\r\nHAPPY HAIKUING!

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SilentQ

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Nomad

Posted January 23, '10 8:06pm UTC

What does the last line mean, I don't know.

(Assuming you use windows) make Microsoft Sam say it, then all shall be revealed!

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Bronze

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Shepherd

Posted January 23, '10 8:09pm UTC

I've missed 2 contest in a row, hmm.

I would of won both probably...XD

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