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Parsat
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Blacksmith

This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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mojo72595
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Nomad

I'd like to live a life unseen
Where there are no words such as war
Where darkness doesnt conquer light
And where men can just be friends

I'd like to live a life unseen
where waters are are as blue as the sky
where grass is as green as can be
And where the earth can be kept clean

I'd like to live a life unseen
I'd like to live the life of my dreams

[b] Alone in the night

LivingToDie
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LivingToDie
303 posts
Nomad

Alone in the night
Drunken, staggering around
Dizzy from alcohol
Falling to the ground

Crawling across the road
My body scratched
From the jagged stones
Trying to find a way home

Someones grabs my shoulder
Starts to brawl with me
Beaten up, he takes my money
I lie there lifelessly.

In our own land of dreams.

LivingToDie
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LivingToDie
303 posts
Nomad

The shape of our universe
Apparently, nobody knows
Some say it's round
Others say that's wrong

Everyone in the world
Relies on opinions
Nothing's ever a fact
Perhaps this is a dream

Nobody really knows anything
All our lives are on strings
Waiting on what other people do
We'll never make the first move.

That seems pretty rubbish when I read over it, but oh well.

Drowning in your tears

TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

Drowning in your tears,
That fall sparkling from your eyes,
The sorrow fills the empty room,
And swells towards the skies,
I find myself trying to swim,
But your regrets bog me down,
I'm falling through your broken dreams,
I'm not afraid to drown.

[/b]No one told me[b]

LivingToDie
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LivingToDie
303 posts
Nomad

Deep in our dismayed hearts
Pain caused from the start
Sobbing to ourselves
Wanting to seem strong

The pain of our words
Ruining peoples minds
Forgetting what they've heard
They leave those thoughts behind

We betray our close friends
Speaking falsely of them
Their minds don't mend
Going out, with a bitter end.


Can't live without you.

TackyCrazyTNT
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TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

Can't live without you
Can't live without the sound of your voice
I can't live without your laughs and love,
But that's not really my choice

I would forget you if I could,
But forgetting hurts too much,
I can't live without your smile
I can't live without your touch.

Craziness and Insanity

LivingToDie
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LivingToDie
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Nomad

Losing to my mind
Craziness and insanity
Depressed and useless
Represent my personality
My life's truly a mess
Stressed from my thoughts
A battle with my mind
I sit there musing
Always end up losing.


We can never control ourselves.

TackyCrazyTNT
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TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

We can never control ourselves,
We do as we please,
Fighting the authority,
Stealing from the poor,
Committing acts
We wish we could take back.
And making mistakes
That haunt our minds forever.

Bolded Words

LivingToDie
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LivingToDie
303 posts
Nomad

Speaking
Bolded words
That stand out
So they're heard
By a persons shout
A faint whisper
We can't understand
Almost like a lisper.

LivingToDie
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LivingToDie
303 posts
Nomad

Forgot to add a line, sorry.

The things that define us

TruthfulLiar
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Nomad

To live a life of love
To have warmth within you
Is nothing I could ever do
Which saddens my heart
I've been bitter from the start
If I kissed someone lips
They'd never speak again
As I have a curse
That turns lips to crisp
And, they'd never speak another word
They'll never be heard
Their lips shut tight
Being silent throughout their life.


That's why I never write poems..

Blood boiling with hared

waluigi
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Shepherd

A misunderstanding line
can be so innocent.
Knowing not the horrors
that come from the meaning
of things.
If only the mind could stay this way.

The crisis has ended

SupaLegit
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644 posts
Nomad

The crisis has ended,
Our goal we sought
Is now in our arms.

No more pain, no more suffering
For some cause that has us all
Interwoven in each others' fate.

Hazy, lost eyes no more.
The bombshells buried under
The dust of destruction.
I wave farewell to the insanity;
The crisis has ended.

A lone howl pierces the night

TackyCrazyTNT
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TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

The crisis has ended,
The people are all sound,
The foe has retreated,
Their weapons lie on the ground.

Dammit, Supa, I got ninja'd. I'll do yours too.

A lone howl pierces the night,
Like a jagged shaft of glass,
Echoes through the trees,
And whistles through the grass.

The wolf stands alone,
He stands vigil cloaked by night,
But his two eyes burn
With the moon's yellow light.

That's really bad, I know. Shush up.

Sleep, Sleep, Sleep

howlett
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Nomad

Sleep, Sleep, Sleep
Deep in my dreams
Dreaming of you
And your smile
We're together
Happy forever
Won't be brought down
By haters tomorrow.

___

Yeah, that's awful.

Mourning to myself

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