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Parsat
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This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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ManiacalMind
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Nomad

A droplet of rain
Trickling down
From the sky
Landing on the ground.

Now, there's a puddle
For people to jump in
As they enjoy themselves
Smiling; a wide grin.

Aggression building up

AquaRescue
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Peasant

A mountain pokes awkward in the mist
The winter breeze drifts through the air
The coolness you can feel
is the mountains breeze.

ManiacalMind
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Nomad

Aqua, you were meant to use the line I posted, not the one posted by Parsat. :3
Also, you forgot to put down a line.

Cinna
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Nomad

The answer is none
Because you can't find it
I've watched you try
I've watched you die
Can't you see us laughing?
sandwiches are yummy

ManiacalMind
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Nomad

Sandwiches are yummy
The flavors of toppings
The texture of bread
Melts in your mouth.
Gulping down the sandwich
Fulfilling the hunger.

ManiacalMind
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Nomad

*sigh* My brain is useless today, I forgot a line.

Unicorns are magical

MoonFairy
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Shepherd

Unicorns are magical
Leprechauns are too.
I'll use my awesome magic
To revive this thread, and make a rose turn blue.

TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

You forgot a topic...

MoonFairy
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Shepherd

Cold blooded killer, walking down your road

TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

I'm no good with horror thingys, Moon.

Cold blooded killer,
Walking down your road,
He lies in wait,
Hoping that you'll stumble
Hoping that you'll trip up.
Then he'll have you.
Then he'll grab you in his claws.
His claws that are as cold as ice,
His claws that can rip through steel.
The cold blooded killer that lies in wait.
The cold blooded killer that has iron claws.
He'll take you if you step out of line.

I pause for effect,
But there's no need.
The neighbor's kids
Won't horse around anymore.

TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

Oh, wait.
Clouds and Puffs of Air

MoonFairy
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I'm no good at happy thingys, Tacky.

Clouds and puffs of air
Meandering through the sky
Making crazy pictures
To be transformed by our eyes.
Giving rain an shade
All around the Earth
Then away they slowly fade
To come back in a constant rebirth.

It's time for the war

Cinna
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Nomad

It's time for the war
We're all gonna die
Because we aren't good
At fighting

It's time for the war
Although we try
We're gonna get creamed
Out there

It's time for the war
I'm gonna cry
They'll kill us all
Forever

It's time for the war
The darkness falls
Hide your kids
It's over
He's Climbing In Your Windows

MoonFairy
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He's Climbing In Your Windows
Snatchin' yo' pets up
Tryin to sell em so you need to
Hide yo' cats
Hide yo' dogs
Hide yo' fish
Hide yo' birds!
And whatever other kinda pet you have.
___

I blame you for that crap Cinna.

Double rainbow, all the way

TackyCrazyTNT
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Double rainbow, all the way
Cross the sky!!!
Yeah, yeah....
I'm so high!
I walked up this whole mountain
just to see some light!
Yeah, yeah....
I'm so high!

I hope that isn't too innapropriate.
I can't think of another vid except

Sunny-D and Rum, Yum, Yum

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