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Parsat
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Blacksmith

This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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LivingToDie
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LivingToDie
303 posts
Nomad

The bird soars
Gliding high
As it explores
Looking for more.


Short poem while I'm bored.

The wind blows

darver
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darver
189 posts
Nomad

The wind blows,
He knows,
The bird goes,
I know,
The the thing goes,
It craps,
It falls on my jumper from GAP,
I know.

Another fail

The cheese smells

CommanderDude7
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Nomad

The cheese smells
The light shines
The crowd roars
I make my move
Hitting the bell
"Checkmate!" I shriek
Wibble Wobble

scardragon99
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scardragon99
570 posts
Nomad

Wibble wobble off i go!
I fall and graze my leg
Oh no!!

Very short and such a fail. Oh well i'll probably get better at this.

Checkmate

TackyCrazyTNT
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1,936 posts
Peasant

Checkmate
I say to you, for shame
too late,
for you to win the game,

Babbling brooks

Maverick4
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Maverick4
6,800 posts
Peasant

Bab'ling brooks flow down
The mountain. Chattering words
Speaking out to me.

The mist rises out of the dark ravine.
(And may be something more than four lines?)

waluigi
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Shepherd

The mist rises out of the dark ravine
what could be down there is yet unseen
No light penetrates down to the bottom

It's there I shall go, for a great treasure,
they say, sits at the end of this bottomless pit
What is it's value, no one quite knows.

I go, descend into darkness, I cannot see
will this all be worth my time, risk my life
for riches that might not even be?

I will find out in few moments from now
the bottom is near, I can sense it, I can tell
what is down here? I shall see.

A repetitive noise

TackyCrazyTNT
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TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

A repetitive noise,
A buzzing beep,
A loudly clanging
herd of sheep,
A bashing, banging
waterfall,
A bouncing, crashing,
falling ball,
A slurping, groaning
choir of hounds,
A howling growling
noise resounds.

Life is good

IcyShards
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Nomad

Life is good,
Happiness around,
People smiling,
No sorrow found,
Until the day of death,
That will eventually come,
Taking away our breath and,
The lives of some.

Venturing along the tracks.

TackyCrazyTNT
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TackyCrazyTNT
1,936 posts
Peasant

Venturing along the tracks
Who knows when we will get back
Chartering green lands oh so new,
Journeying across the ocean blue,
Discovering worlds unseen,
Except perhaps in a shadowy dream

I like this topic so much but no one posts.
Marvelous me

IcyShards
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IcyShards
9 posts
Nomad

Marvelous me
I'm better than you
You should see
There's nothing you can do
I'll beat you everyday
You will always lose
And, I'll always win
You'll experience the boos.

The paths we choose.

TackyCrazyTNT
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TackyCrazyTNT
1,936 posts
Peasant

The paths we choose
define who we are,
A rat in a hole
Or a glorious shooting star,
Scrabbling for dirt
Or reaching for the sky,
The path I choose
can make me fly.

Maybe it's something else

waluigi
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waluigi
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Shepherd

Maybe it's something else
that keeps us all on edge;
not the constant fighting
of countries' warring heads
and the constant threat
of mother nature striking
that's causing us to fret.

But, then, what could it be?
Is it some unseen thing
that keeps us on the
edge of sanity, some being
that fills the mind with worry?
Perhaps its meant to stay unknown
A part of nature, it could be
A place or thing never to be shown.

Grayness clouds the eyes

TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

That was really good!

Grayness clouds the eyes,
of a man fading from life,
Such sorrow and broken hope,
Such horror and strife.
His arm falls limply to his side,
His sword falls from his hand,
This is what war does to us
Death of the memories of man.
A sole figure lying,
on the cold hard ground,
Its sad to think of the life he lived,
When his hopes were still to be found.

I'd like to live a life unseen

StrategicCaptain
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393 posts
Nomad

I'd like to live a life unseen,
but all my fun would disappear,
I wouldn't feel the soft touch of the green.
The love I had would fade in mid-air,
I wouldn't know left from right,
and I probably wouldn't care.
My pain and misery would not show a better path,
I would slip through the cracks,
and fail at math.


The monkeys walked around the park

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