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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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Darktroop07
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I begin darkness.
I begin strong agony.
I begin Despair.

murasaki9
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That's the haiku the other part was a message to you, so let me rephrase it I can keep writing haiku's as long as I have a theme XP.
Maketh sense. Here's a new theme: doors

the grand charade strides
we are all caught up in this
false parade of lies
dair5
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Doors shut and locked tight.
A mind closed off, never seen.
A key in plain sight.

killersup10
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this lonely bullivard
of broken dreams today
Those lines are 6 syllables each... put the "of" on the second line to make it a true haiku


this (1) lon(2)e(3)ly(4) boul(5)iv(6)ard(7)
please explain why you thought this was only 6 syliblys?








darkness
tolling on these lives
currupting hearts and the minds
depressing killer

Skeleton_Pilot
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please explain why you thought this was only 6 syliblys?


Because "lonely" is a two-syllable word... I have NEVER heard anyone pronounce the "e" as an extra syllable! =P

Also Sal, I loved your haiku for obvious reasons! =D
Darktroop07
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doors
They open up hope.
They open up old memo's.
They bring agony.

Mickeyryn
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Raindrops
You hear the trickle,
You savor the true pleasure,
They alone are Life.

Skeleton_Pilot
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Young Jim Morrison
Gone in the blink of an eye
His fire extinguished.

murasaki9
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Yay! DT really came through with his doors!!
New Theme: this land is our land

there is a bright sun
let it shine like a candle
and we can be hot

Darktroop07
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this land is our land
We fought for freedom.
We bled through our bloodshed.
Strength through unity.~Belgium motto


An inspiration from my homeland.

Rapyion
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She is like the ice
To my heart that burns like flames.
She is like my calm.

She is like the rose
That blooms beautifully
In the twilight sky.

murasaki9
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Wow, DT hits a jackpot again!!
New theme: links

A haiku for someone.
His heart burn cold, hard
I looked into his eyes and
he recoiled from me

Darktroop07
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Links
Right click, open link.
Right click, left click, close link.
Opening links up.

Skeleton_Pilot
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Right click, left click, close link.


Alas, 'tis only 6 syllables!
Darktroop07
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Links
Right click, open link.
Right click, left click, closing link.
Opening links up.
Thanks knew something was off so how much AP you want XD

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