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murasaki9
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Blacksmith

I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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Maverick4
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Peasant

Nature is up next.
And I must summon my best.
For mav's last judgeing.


*clap clap clap*
acmed
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Nomad

[quote]Nature is up next.
And I must summon my best.
For mav's last judgeing.


*clap clap clap*[/quote]

Don't clap to yourself. It's embarrassing.

Legend (A tribute to our former Haiku contest judge: Maverick4)

Another soul, gone.
Made a foot step in this soil.
In stone, forever.
EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

You must make a choice:
The pressure is high;
There's never a second chance.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

You must make a choice:
The pressure is high;
There's never a second chance.

Epic fail

You must make a choice:
There's never a second chance;
The pressure is high.
Maverick4
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Peasant

(A tribute to our former Haiku contest judge: Maverick4)


I haven't retired yet. And its MAV. Gosh.

And sucking up will get you now where... :P
acmed
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Nomad

And sucking up will get you now where... :P


*Sighs with disappointment*

Air

Our life's medicine.
The world without any air,
Will let us all die.
dair5
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Shepherd

Dair

I'm sorry Acmed.
I just had to make this one.
Please forgive me now.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Love destroys all pain;
Can't we all just get along,
Even for a day?


And its MAV. Gosh.


He could've done something worse.
acmed
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Nomad

He could've done something worse.


But who ever said me and Mav were this muscular?

Weakness

Watch the enemy.
Attack his soft spot. Weakness.
Now strengthen yourself.
dair5
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Shepherd

Light. Enpower me.
Darkness. Break me. Confuse me.
Find a common ground.

AND......

Hate. Kills me with love.
Love. Kills off all of my hate.
Kill. Why is it here?

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Am I too stoic?
I never fight with others,
Only with myself.

dair5
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Shepherd

OHHHH! Emp, your haikus are really good.

Just get off my back.
Your expectations are too high.
And love is too low.

acmed
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Nomad

Ruler of the World

Bow down before me.
I rule you peasants, your souls.
Doomsday, is right now.

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Wow, everyone's here is really pushing this thread! Thank you all!

I will start talking
there's nothing better to do
satisfacti-on

murasaki9
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Wow, oh, wow! I went back a few pages and I just can't believe the effort I see!
It's wonderful.

It tingles all through
It makes me feel warm and nice
it's joy at its best.

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