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Posted Aug 29, '09 at 7:00pm
shayneii
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You might have a better chance at winning if you used proper grammar... :P
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Posted Aug 29, '09 at 9:21pm
dudeguy45
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Posted Aug 29, '09 at 9:24pm
Bronze
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What is wrong with it?
A haiku is a poem composed of 3 lines, 5 syllables for the first and last line, and seven for the middle.
5-7-5
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Posted Aug 29, '09 at 9:28pm
Moabarmorgamer
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The water ripples
The stone skips across the pond
The frogs leap away
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Posted Aug 29, '09 at 9:31pm
dudeguy45
2,589 posts
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gleaming from a lemon sun
silence and peace come over your soul
yes, you have found nirvana
Happy, BUDDY?
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Posted Aug 29, '09 at 9:34pm
Bronze
2,180 posts
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Nope, still not right XD
Five syllables please
Seven will be good right here
Five more for here too
There, that is a Haiku about the structure of a haiku.
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Posted Aug 29, '09 at 9:36pm
Moabarmorgamer
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Lol. Unfortunately bronze, this week's theme is a pond, not proper haiku etiquette.
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Posted Aug 30, '09 at 6:27am
StormDragon
406 posts
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Ponds have fish to eat
Koi ponds have big goldfish
Can we eat goldfish?
I love Japenes culter.
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Posted Aug 30, '09 at 9:21am
Maverick4
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I cantez standz iz winz people dooo thiz!
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Posted Aug 30, '09 at 9:51am
dudeguy45
2,589 posts
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Mine is like that!
*facepalm* SYLLABLES! I was doing words!
gleaming from the sun
silence and hope come over
yes, you have found peace
HAPPY BUDDY?
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