I saw Legend doing this, and I thought it was a good idea. I found that poetry is a good way to say stuff, so...
Also, feel free to comment, I don't mind what you think about it.
You say that you trust me
But how can I know.
you say you love me
But it never shows.
you know nothing at all
of how I feel
'cos I hide it in smiles
and all that false zeal
I'm fed up and sick
of my freedom destroyed
I cant trust you with how I feel
'cos you will just say
That it's nothing, and that it isn't a big deal
Why can't you see and take notice.
You don' even know I'm here.
I try hard to please you
and do as you say
But still don't tell you my fear.
We were a family once
with music and joy and fun.
But now they all left
there's a hole in my heart
and now nothing can be done.
So say to me that you're proud.
That no-one you know can do that
but see past the skill, to the mind within
and see all the damage you've done
The first talking about your father right ? It's really Deep and share me a lot, Congratz! It remember me a lot of feelings about mine ..
For the 2nd , First time i see a poem about Asthma x'D It's strange but i liked it , and the way you describe a thing like that. It shouldn't be easy to live with that everyday.
And Finally 3rd was cool too ! Sometimes Parents seems to control our life ,
it's not very pleasant , I think it's their way to show us that they want the best for ourselves. But in my opinion it's not the better solution , They should listen us and maybe one day they can understand our point of view and see why some littles things matter a lot for us.
You seem to be talented for making poem , maybe you should participate on the contest ?
Here's the link : Contest !!
Current theme is memory I think you can doing well into it !
Hahaha you will probably laugh but.. It's like this exam in the past where I just forgot one page.. X'D so I've just see this one Hahaha I will probably take a look at the first page and give you my thoughts about
Edit: about Good Day at work, Wow you really like your job x'D you must be lucky, I personally hope I will find a place like this were I can feel that ! Thanks for sharing happiness !
Hahaha the second make me laugh, it's original to see a poem about armorgames x'D It's true for me too, I'm more of a solitary walker xD but I must admit I really enjoyed the community here, some people are really nice and talented here it's cool to share with !
The 3rd is about your family ? It's the way I've see it x'D I sometimes feel very different of my family.. Sometimes they talk together and I really don't know what to say they're are in their world.. They often seen to late I was right, doing mistake that they've could dodge if they were listen to what I've said
The 4th is really deep you seems to suffer a lot..
Life is really cruel, but it's like a pendulum, when you take a lot of bad thing, One day you will take a lot of good too =) patience and endure are the key !
About your artwork ! Wow.. You're really talented, It's not your original artwork but seriously ! You have nice pen skills ! I'm pretty sure you will doing very well on a real ! maybe you will try some entries to the Halloween armatars contest ? Here's the link: Contest
Wow.. you're not very lucky as I can see x'D I've experienced death a little too not in a way as far as you, strangely I ever left well x'D I'm sorry sad memories about my country x'D
Hey I just want to say if you're are here again it's surely because you're worth it hahaha maybe you will shine one day !
The next was really sad.. :/ but it share emotional stuff ! Congrats !
And finally ! It's always hard when you try to shine for people and they just crush you x'D, it's really hard to live in a place that we hate x'D I personally feel that everyday, I've just want World to change in a better way, I can't understand some corrupted peoples who lead us and less the others who just accept that x'D maybe one day we could live in a good world ? I've haste to see that happen !
Hope my thoughts can help you ! You're talented so never give up
See you again maybe ^.^ !
Your verset reminds me of a memory x'D, Bike don't like me either Hahaha
When I was young maybe 13-14 years old, I was in a forest slope with my classroom,
My first wheel hit a rock and the brakes were disable x'D So I started to gain more and more speed and I can see a deep precipice and can't stop my bike xD the thing who saved my life was a little tree x'D it was really thin but it stop me like that comic scene in the cartoon x'D when the tree balances to right and left x'D !
Nature can be really surprising !
I hope you don't need to add more verset to that one in the future Hahaha!
Try to be careful Hahaha !
I felt like expressing myself after reading your craft, Saphire.
I dont know if you are in the same situation as me, but I identify with your verses.
Please keep telling us your stories as beautifully arranged words
@Hardstrike I've been off armourgames for a while and only just saw your comment. Thank you. I'm honoured to have inspired you. I'm so glad you like them. I think you might just have re-inspired me! :')
