ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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jacksonghuntington
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Oh snap sky!!! hes getting all down on endscape!!!

Zaork
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The weeping crushed blues
Constraints can no longer hold
Falling as cries heard

jacksonghuntington
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uhhh i think he meant "derailment"


ya hes right... thanks for clearing that up.
KingLemon
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Here's my entry since I am too la..busy at the moment to come up with different one's:

Destiny's whistle
blows, you are the conductor.
Stay on the right track.

FallenSky
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okkk, let us all understand i write like im texting because usually i am texting... if by my "spelling" u mean that...
anddd i have already said that each opinion would vary, anddd the multiple judge thing is bad, and if u have already been using the same... "frame" excuse my ignorance.... for it did not seem so...


Texting is evil, as is Msn and facebook. Whenever I write something on a social network I try to do it with perfect grammar to not lose what I have acquired. We've seen so many cases of students - and even university students - lost their french here because they used too much abbreviated-internet talk. I was just trying to help that's all.

As the frame, I meant the basic ranking structure; all else is purely for the judge to decide.

Endscape
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Texting is evil, as is Msn and facebook


well, jus call me Darth Vadar becuz i luvs um all my guy, oooo u should try twitter too, dont 4get bout AIM either..

ok, now if u have an animosity towards me THAT is one thing, however, if u do not then DO NOT take it out on me,

please and thank you.
FallenSky
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ok, now if u have an animosity towards me THAT is one thing, however, if u do not then DO NOT take it out on me,
please and thank you.


Don't be so fired up, I've nothing against you; you're the one being susceptible :P.
Why would I have something against you? I'm just trying to make a better world :333333333

And concerning your suggestions, I hate absolutely all social networks. Actually, the only site on which I communicate with other people is here on Ag.

EnterOrion
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Hey guys, try to keep the chatting to a minimum. Take the debates to your comments.

Thank you.

Your All-Powerful judge,
Orion

FallenSky
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Oh why, WHY must I be brung back to order!
It's not my style to be as undisciplined, but he asked for explanations, and then I complained about his spelling and...and...I'm sorry Enter!!!

*Bows down because, you know, lightning strikes higher ground and...Enter > Cronide*

You had to utter
The faintest of words, I had
To dispose of you

I doubt it'll be my official entry, but oh well; thought police WILL GET YOU!

jacksonghuntington
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The days grow longer
Over the mountain of fate
Shaken by her love.
_____________________________

I think this is my official entry.
I wrote this in the P.O.V that love can really mess you up.
Sorry fallen and endscape if I did anything bad.
Didn't mean to .

HahiHa
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Left a pre-traced life,
Now am a fool in their eyes;
I trace my own path.

...who says derailment is necessarily bad? ^^

jacksonghuntington
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The line I follow
Longing to have liberty
Off the path of fate

Okay, now THIS is my official entry. Lol realized i use fate a lot. Use this one for judging.

GhostOfMatrix
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Ill have to think of a better one than that.

The deadline was yesterday, so you can't enter.
thecattygrl
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Love Light And Lost

Love is from the heart
Lighting all of your paths
So you wont be lost.

-THECATTYGRL <3

thecattygrl
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Love Light And Lost

Love is from the heart
Lighting all of your dark paths
So you wont be lost.

-THECATTYGRL <3


This is my actual entry... Thanks =)

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