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Parsat
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This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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lambybug
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the wind blew harshly in the cold
clacking the branches of trees
feel the snow falling
a bitter sting to your face

next...
cold eyes looking to the sky

lambybug
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Nomad

forget the last post....

wrong page!!

LivingToDie
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LivingToDie
303 posts
Nomad

Eyes that Froze

Cold eyes looking to the sky,
Ridding anything of warmth,
Killing every bit of joy,
Freezing the rays of sun,
Turning them into icy shards.
Those piercing eyes look away,
Everything is back to normal,
Everything those eyes aren't,
The body pulls out a mirror,
Looking into the mirror,
Staring at my reflection,
My eyes grow colder,
As I lie on the ground,
Heart beating slowly,
As it comes to a stop.


Perfection awaits you

TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

Perfection awaits you,
Just take this white pill
I promise it's worth
All the tears that you spill

Your skin will turn pale,
Clear like the moon;
You'll be more beautiful,
It'll all happen soon.

I promise it all,
The pain will be gone
Just close your red eyes;
Escape won't be long.

I speak of tragedy

Kyouzou
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I speak of tragedy
A heartbreaking tale

Love that never was
Lover that never will be

"wherefore art thou"
Words never spoken

It is better to have loved and lost
Than to never have loved at all

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I'm rusty, I need to write more.

Tearful Comedy

the_manta
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Tearful comedy,
A thing undefined,
as we go through the means that the end justifies.

My comedy ends,
But what have I done?
Have I hurt far too many for the well being of one?

I've taken this path,
And I've done these such deeds,
And I cry not at the results but my actions preceding.

The end, it is good,
But the tears, they have flowed.
It's just the way that my story's been told.
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Going off the definition of a comedy story, which is pretty much a story with a happy ending...

Broken timers, ticking to a time already turned

iMogwai
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Broken timers, ticking to a time already turned,
A never-ending chore,
Were thrown in a fire and I watched how they burned,
Because, well, they didn't work any more.


I didn't know what else to make of it. The first line was kind of odd. The fact that the timers were broken made it seem like it it was literal, rather than a metaphor for, I dunno, wanting to change the past or something.

Next line:

It could have been worse

If it's hard to start with, feel free to add "I guess" or "I suppose" or something similar.

aknerd
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If it's hard to start with, feel free to add "I guess" or "I suppose" or something similar.

Not as hard as the next person's will be... hehehe.

It could have been worse
There was but one hearse
(Well, at least at first)

It wasn't all that bad
There were few who were sad
Worst days, we've all had

Granted, it could be better
Had I left my itchy sweater
But brought my case of liquor

All in all, not a bad wake
There was that one mistake
when the body fell in the lake

About what we suspected
For the father who neglected
From the kids he rejected

Next line:

I eat my meat in the shadows!

(Yes, the exclamation point is mandatory.)
Maverick4
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Not as hard as the next person's will be... hehehe.


I eat my meat in
The shadows. Canabali-
Zing people. Yum-yum!

Next line: Emotions like Robots.
iMogwai
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Robots like emotions,
They taste like joy and mud,
Which is a really odd notion,
Since robots don't have taste buds.


If you're going to cheat, then so am I. It's "First Line Poetry" not "First bunch of words poetry," silly. Oh, and the exclamation point wasn't optional.

Kthxbai.

Next line:

I wish I had some cake

TackyCrazyTNT
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Why are the lines so hard? T.T

I wish I had some cake,
My mouth is watering.
The scent of cream
Wafts across the room
So dimly lit and dark.

The ache of waking up

aknerd
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Peasant

The ache of waking up
Like the act of falling down
When I'm lost in my head-
It's a stumble into reality
My dreams torn like a
severed arm.

Next Line:
Are we not drawn onward, we few, drawn onward to new era?

(Yes, it has to be exactly like that. Put an "a" before "new", and I will be sorely disappointed in you. It's a palindrome, in case you didn't notice.)

iMogwai
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Are we not drawn onward, we few, drawn onward to new era?
Away from pyramids, gladiators, and Thor and his hammer,
To a time when mere mortals are revered like Zeus and Hera,
A time when people lack the patience to use proper spelling and grammar.

We read about how a golfer cheats on his wife,
Much like the Greeks read about Zeus,
We read about how they live life,
And they call this "news".

Is this the new era, where we worship fame,
It's the same old story in disguise,
And I suspect things will always be the same,
Humanity seems to have a thing for lies.


Next line: It never ends
Kthxbai

Maverick4
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Peasant

It's "First Line Poetry" not "First bunch of words poetry,"


Isn't it all the same?

It never ends.
Step in; Step out,
Loud.
As Darkness reigns
Over the land.

I lose control.
Burn up; Burn out,
How?
As Stars go out
Over the land.

I can't break free.
Break lose; Break out,
Pain!
Why have chains
When we can't move?

Looking out, looking down, looking in.
Way down here,
Where the light is dimmer.

Looking out, looking down, looking in.
Way down here,
Where the light is dimmer.

Next line: Mercy! Mercy! Have mercy on me.
Kyouzou
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Jester

Mercy! Mercy! Have mercy on me.
Take not your gun in hand.

Bring me a life of love.
Gift to me a world at peace.

I beg thee for mercy.
Save me from this world.


Infinite void

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