ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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iMogwai
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Need another heart.
One more to complete the set.
The river's here. Flush.


It's about poker...

Pazx
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Freak may need to be reminded that the pronounciation guide is in no way related to syllables )

iMogwai
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Freak may need to be reminded that the pronounciation guide is in no way related to syllables )


I suspect it may also depend on your accent, and if the person who wrote the haiku used it as a one syllable word, you should read it as one too.
Endscape
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Need another heart.
One more to complete the set.
The river's here. Flush.
It's about poker...

hahahahaha i like it, lol, i like poker too....... been playing forrrrr 9 years now.
KingLemon
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I'm content with Honorable mention ...
Congratz Kyouzou

really? Hearts?! I'm happy, i'm a weirdo and for the past two months have been practicing making haikus on my facebook...i have a poop load of "heart" haikus...now just to find the best one...lol...

will enter as soon as i find the best one imo

KingLemon
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Grr i'm stuck between:
Heart pounding like drums
Palms sweating, voice studdering.
I must be in love.
&
I will take this heart
And give it to you, my love.
Said he to the wall.

It sort of depends on whether or not it will be judged based on the haiku's subject being mainly the heart or not. If not then i'm going to have to go with my first haiku being my official entry...

KingLemon
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oh crap! never mind...i failed to check the rules...i'm an idiot...those were both written before...hmmm now i gotta think of one for this!!
-15min later-
A hole in my heart
filled only with your sweet love
together, we're one

my inspiration was a doughnut xD, lol i'm adding this to my haiku's on fb just bc i like it so much.

Ghgt99
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The void in my heart
Is filled by kissing your face
Again and again

My inspiration was from my girlfriend Kaylee.

FallenSky
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Borne so many aches,
throbbing effortlessly so;
A coral organ

The coral is a fascinating subject; it is the only organism in the world to have been classified as an animal, a plant AND a mineral!

Endscape
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"we're" i believe is 2 syllables, its a compound word ya know...

and if EITHER of those other 2 kinglemon had posted qualified.....
i would have cryed knowing pre-maturely that i have lost.
im adding those to my personal quote colection, giving credit to where it is due...

Freakenstein
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"we're" i believe is 2 syllables, its a compound word ya know...


We're [weer] is one syllable, as is it's and don't. The syllables of contractions go by the formed word. Thanks for checking though!

Freak may need to be reminded that the pronounciation guide is in no way related to syllables


Because even though multiple websites verify otherwise, he is still wrong because one states to the contrary. Yep, he's a terrible judge. He should be replaced with EnterOrion, which is a definite after this theme because he is so terrible.
Parsat
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Four sides locked in war:
And who was the inciter?
Reign of the Black Queen.

Based off a certain card game...

Ghgt99
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Was it Hearts? =P

waluigi
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Here is my entry. I completely forgot about last week's round.

Place of love's domain
constant fight of love and hate
beating with feeling

XVERB
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man... i haven't been here in a while...

alone without love
beaten, thrown down, rejected
after constant try

my haiku skills have not improved):

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