ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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iMogwai
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The FUUUUUN is still one sillable, pick me or the great budha will kill on you.


Well, I don't have much say regarding the final decision, but yours was definitely my favourite haiku so far. The capital letters just make it better.

And no, I'm not being sarcastic. I thought it was hilarious.
jacksonghuntington
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The heart is precious
A beautiful sign of hope
Some things never heal


This is about a broken heart... WWWWWWAAAAAAAHHHHH
lol jk.

DemonicEyed
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Heartbeat pulsating,
Pressure that is so immense,
Heart stops- heart attack.

If I did the lines wrong tell me, I don't count syllables right, my pronunciation is iffy.

KingLemon
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This is not my entry...and i know i'm really late with this, i haven't been at a computer to post it here but this is one i made for Valentines Day

A busy Cupid
Soars around, spreading Amor.
Love is in the air!

@DemonicEyed You're haiku is structured correctly; 5-7-5.

Endscape
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again.... this time at double rainbow dude.... THAT, was powerful...

Freakenstein
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Hey guys, sorry to do this to ya, but....I won't be able to judge the entries until Sunday, as I have important company over. As sooon as she's gone, though, I will immediately get back to judging and cast a new theme. I know you guys don't like late entries, but I promise it will be done Sunday!

DemonicEyed
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You could always give us the theme now, (if you have it decided) to give us some time to work on our Haiku. (If you want too)

And then you could also end it sooner for the delayed time. (Again, if you want too.)

FallenSky
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Ah, it's not like I haven't used everyone to late judgings hahaha!

jacksonghuntington
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awwwwwwwww i think freakestien has a girl friend from what he said!!!!!!!!!

As sooon as she's gone
AWWWWWW hes balancing love and a.g and for my last time, AWWWWWWWWWW
FallenSky
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If relationships have thaught me anything, it's that they don't blend well with Ag; I'll have my own darn girl to thank for that.
You know Freak, there's always people who can judge for you if you're indisposed to judging at the moment *wink wink*

Ghgt99
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Yeah, Frank. Look at the above user, winkwinknudgenudge.

FallenSky
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Are you *wink wink* trying to imply something, perhaps? Because I *wink wink* was absolutely not!

Ghgt99
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Are you *winkwinknudgenudge* trying to imply that I *winkwinknudgenudge* was trying to imply *winkwinknudgenudge* something *winkwinknudgenudge* because I *winkwinknudgenudge* was definitely *winkwinknudgenudge* not.

jacksonghuntington
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hahahahaha i started conflict! life is great. :P

Dante92
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This is ridicoulos and boring
But I do this because I'm bored
Well, now I am out

Haikus = Nonsense

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